Fecha: 10/6/2021 | Creado por: Victoria Maria
Categoria: Story
  • Marina hace 5 meses
    The story starts with the sentence the text specifies. You included the two things requested
    The tenses in the story are ok.
    You used strong adjectives to describe people/things and adverbs to describe actions. Great!
    You haven't included a simile (I felt as though/if I was going to fall) It's a comparison that is like a methaphor
    Be careful with punctuation
    You used direct speech. Great!