Thiago Macia, Facundo Martin y Tobias Zenter
Fecha: 10/6/2021 | Creado por: Thiago Valentin
Categoria: Story
Comentarios
  • Marina hace 5 meses
    There isn't a simile
    Try to include more adverbs
  • Marina hace 5 meses
    The story starts with the sentence the task specifies and the two elements were included.
    There’s a clear beginning- middle – end
    Tenses are ok. Pay attention to past perfect!!!!! x
    There are adjectives to describe people/things
    Punctuation: be careful
    Mistakes
    By train
    The tickets for other means of transport were too expensive
    I had always wanted
    On the other hand
    Didn’t want
    Reached the train but I had lost the ticket
    Surprisingly,